简洁的原理‖淘宝搜

NY Times

So for his first radio performance, an abridged version of the historical novel “The Romance of Sui and Tang Dynasties,” Mr. Shan used the studio’s three recording technicians as his audience and adjusted his performance based on their reactions.

Seattle Times

So for his first radio performance, an abridged version of the historical novel “The Romance of Sui and Tang Dynasties,” Shan used the three recording technicians outside the studioas his audience, adjusting his performance based on their reactions.

简析：

英文书名，报纸上常用引号，图书里常用斜体。

《西雅图时报》把the studio's改为outside the studio，把原来的并列句and adjusted改为分词短语adjusting。我更喜欢改后的文字，读后头脑里会现出一幅图：单先生在棚里表演评书，三位录音师隔着玻璃在录音。