一首诗能病成啥样?
当它陷入官样的花言巧语
它发烧,言不由衷
头疼,隐喻苍白
胡乱地夸饰让它拉稀
不当的搭配生疹子
还有那使它虚脱的句法。
《一首诗能病成啥样》
[尼日利亚🇳🇬] 奥波多迪玛·奥哈
译|余旸
原诗:
𝙃𝙤𝙬 𝙞𝙡𝙡 𝙖 𝙥𝙤𝙚𝙢
by Obododimma Oha
How ill could a poem get?
When it walks into the rhetoric of the Government House
A fever of words saying one thing & meaning another
A headache of weary metaphors
A running tummy of badly cooked the hyperboles
Some rashes of collocations
And an overtax of syntax.
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