杨凡达老师2024考研英语写作点题课第6轮题目范文来了，先🐎再学。

【图画作文范文】
As shown in the picture, a man seated on a bench insists that he can devise a perfect plan to score points in a basketball game, while another man, jumping up and propelling a basketball towards the hoop, thinks that he will succeed as long as he keeps trying. The cartoonist aims to highlight the idea that to solve problems, people should focus on practicing rather than overthinking.

It is universally acknowledged that people often encounter challenges—from studying a master’s degree to competing for a promotion at a multi-national corporation. Admittedly, analyzing a problem repeatedly may enable them to come up with a comprehensive solution that increases their chances of success from the outset. Nevertheless, they are so focused on seeking a perfect solution that they may be unable to make a decision or take action. Conversely, learning by practicing is driven by wisdom. This can not only lead to relatively ideal solutions but also help improve our capacity for addressing constantly changing situations.

In conclusion, trial and error is always beneficial. Parents and schoolteachers should always help children develop a correct problem-solving mindset, while everyone should bear in mind that practice makes perfect. I am fully convinced that through these measures, more and more people can realize their ambitions.

【图表作文范文】
The chart describes the proportion of different factors considered by a city’s non-native residents when they rent apartments. “Rent payment” accounts for 39%, closely followed by “convenience” (36%). The figure for “apartment condition” is 11%.

The following factors contribute to the pattern reflected in the chart. Firstly, “rent payment” takes up the largest share, perhaps because most of the migrating population are not living a rich life, as they may have just moved to start a new career or business. Secondly, convenience is another main factor. The reason may be that easy access to public transportation, supermarkets and hospitals can greatly enhance their living experience, particularly given the current high-pressure, fast-paced lifestyle. Finally, as to why “apartment condition” represents a relatively small proportion, my opinion is that these newcomers consider it insignificant compared with low rent costs and high convenience, which may result from the mindset that rented apartments are only temporary residences.

In my opinion, renting an apartment is a prime choice for the immigrant community. Governments should introduce policies to regulate the house rental industry and provide convenience for the community, while migrators themselves should not follow suit blindly but should select accommodations that best match your needs.

【应用文范文】
Dear Sir or Madam:

I am a third-year undergraduate studying journalism at Nanchang University, and I write this email to seek a part-time position at your esteemed organization.

My purpose of applying for the position is to provide assistance for aged citizens living alone in the city, especially those having difficulty in caring for themselves. I am confident that my childhood of helping my parents do farming work has equipped me with resilience to deal with challenges involved in this position. I am also convinced that the experience gained from participating in on-campus speech and debate contests enables me to actively listen to the old and effectively answer their inquiries or meet their needs.

Thank you for considering my application. I am eagerly awaiting an interview at your earliest convenience.

Sincerely yours,
Li Ming

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