原文:选自金庸《鹿鼎记》
江南近海滨的一条大路上,一队清兵手执刀枪,押着七辆囚车,冲风冒寒,向北而行。前面三辆囚车中分别监禁的是三个男子,都作书生打扮,一个是白发老者,两个是中年人。后面四辆囚车中坐的是女子,最后一辆囚车中是个少妇,怀中抱着个女婴,女婴啼哭不休。她母亲温言相呵,女婴只是大哭。囚车旁一清兵恼了,伸腿在车上踢了一脚,喝道:“再哭,再哭,老子踢死你!”那女婴一惊,哭得更加响了。
DeepL译本:
Jiangnan near the seashore of a big road, a team of Qing soldiers armed with swords and guns, escorting seven prison car, the wind and the cold, to the north. In front of the three prison cars are imprisoned in three men, all dressed as a scholar, a white-haired old man, two are middle-aged. Behind the four prison car is sitting in the woman, the last prison car is a young woman, holding a baby girl in her arms, the baby girl crying endlessly. Her mother's warm words, the baby girl just cried. Prisoner car next to a Qing soldier annoyed, stretched out his leg in the car kicked a foot, said: ‘Crying, crying, I kicked you to death!’ The baby girl was shocked and cried even louder.
Deepseek译本:
Along a broad road near the coastal region of Jiangnan, a troop of Qing soldiers, armed with swords and spears, escorted seven prison carts northward, braving the biting wind and cold. In the first three carts were three men, all dressed as scholars—one an elderly man with white hair, and the other two middle-aged. The following four carts held women, with the last cart occupied by a young mother cradling a crying infant in her arms. The mother whispered soothing words, but the baby continued to wail. A soldier marching beside the cart, irritated by the noise, kicked the cart and shouted, "Keep crying, and I'll kick you to death!" Startled, the infant only cried louder.
人类译者Minford版本:
Along a coastal road somewhere south of the Yangtze river, a detachment of soldiers, each of them armed with a halberd, was escorting a line of seven prison carts, trudging northwards in the teeth of a bitter wind. In each of the first three carts a single male prisoner was caged, identifiable by his dress as a member of the scholar class. One was a white-haired old man. The other two men were of middle years. The four rear carts were occupied by women, the last of them by a young mother holding a baby girl at her breast. The little girl was crying in a continuous wail which her mother's gentle words of comfort were powerless to console. One of the soldiers marching alongside, irritated by the baby's crying, aimed a mighty kick at the cart. "Stop it! Shut up! Or I'll really give you something to cry about!" The baby, startled by this sudden violence, cried even louder.
Deepseek明显胜过最优秀的传统翻译程序,但远逊最优秀的人类译者(不逊于大多数人类译者)。
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