#微博智搜[超话]#@评论罗伯特
##砦烁钲《七绝·清廉颂·依韵和吟石庆元会长〈清廉颂〉》中附注石庆元会长原作《清廉颂》“天下为公装在胸，献身理想是初衷。守廉耐得清官苦，不悔归来两手空”中之“天下为公”词语组合为古人前人诗作中常用频繁、“不悔归来两手空”也见之于明·姜希孟《次仁斋韵·寄一庵·其四》“从师恰得真如趣，一手归来两手空”、只将“一手”改为“不悔”，笔者认为该会长原作涉嫌雷同、仿作古人他人句意句式，原创性不足！再者“献身理想”完全是现代口语化、“守廉耐得清官苦”中“守廉”与“清官苦”在一句中也涉嫌语义重复毫无艺术性缺乏诗意。各位看官认为呢？# https://m.s.weibo.com/applink/go2?noclose=1&url=sinaweibo%3A%2F%2Fsearchall%3Fcontainerid%3D230958%26type%3D200%26q%3D%2523%25E7%25A0%25A6%25E7%2583%2581%25E9%2592%25B2%25E3%2580%258A%25E4%25B8%2583%25E7%25BB%259D%25C2%25B7%25E6%25B8%2585%25E5%25BB%2589%25E9%25A2%2582%25C2%25B7%25E4%25BE%259D%25E9%259F%25B5%25E5%2592%258C%25E5%2590%259F%25E7%259F%25B3%25E5%25BA%2586%25E5%2585%2583%25E4%25BC%259A%25E9%2595%25BF%25E3%2580%2588%25E6%25B8%2585%25E5%25BB%2589%25E9%25A2%2582%25E3%2580%2589%25E3%2580%258B%25E4%25B8%25AD%25E9%2599%2584%25E6%25B3%25A8%25E7%259F%25B3%25E5%25BA%2586%25E5%2585%2583%25E4%25BC%259A%25E9%2595%25BF%25E5%258E%259F%25E4%25BD%259C%25E3%2580%258A%25E6%25B8%2585%25E5%25BB%2589%25E9%25A2%2582%25E3%2580%258B%25E2%2580%259C%25E5%25A4%25A9%25E4%25B8%258B%25E4%25B8%25BA%25E5%2585%25AC%25E8%25A3%2585%25E5%259C%25A8%25E8%2583%25B8%25EF%25BC%258C%25E7%258C%25AE%25E8%25BA%25AB%25E7%2590%2586%25E6%2583%25B3%25E6%2598%25AF%25E5%2588%259D%25E8%25A1%25B7%25E3%2580%2582%25E5%25AE%2588%25E5%25BB%2589%25E8%2580%2590%25E5%25BE%2597%25E6%25B8%2585%25E5%25AE%2598%25E8%258B%25A6%25EF%25BC%258C%25E4%25B8%258D%25E6%2582%2594%25E5%25BD%2592%25E6%259D%25A5%25E4%25B8%25A4%25E6%2589%258B%25E7%25A9%25BA%25E2%2580%259D%25E4%25B8%25AD%25E4%25B9%258B%25E2%2580%259C%25E5%25A4%25A9%25E4%25B8%258B%25E4%25B8%25BA%25E5%2585%25AC%25E2%2580%259D%25E8%25AF%258D%25E8%25AF%25AD%25E7%25BB%2584%25E5%2590%2588%25E4%25B8%25BA%25E5%258F%25A4%25E4%25BA%25BA%25E5%2589%258D%25E4%25BA%25BA%25E8%25AF%2597%25E4%25BD%259C%25E4%25B8%25AD%25E5%25B8%25B8%25E7%2594%25A8%25E9%25A2%2591%25E7%25B9%2581%25E3%2580%2581%25E2%2580%259C%25E4%25B8%258D%25E6%2582%2594%25E5%25BD%2592%25E6%259D%25A5%25E4%25B8%25A4%25E6%2589%258B%25E7%25A9%25BA%25E2%2580%259D%25E4%25B9%259F%25E8%25A7%2581%25E4%25B9%258B%25E4%25BA%258E%25E6%2598%258E%25C2%25B7%25E5%25A7%259C%25E5%25B8%258C%25E5%25AD%259F%25E3%2580%258A%25E6%25AC%25A1%25E4%25BB%2581%25E6%2596%258B%25E9%259F%25B5%25C2%25B7%25E5%25AF%2584%25E4%25B8%2580%25E5%25BA%25B5%25C2%25B7%25E5%2585%25B6%25E5%259B%259B%25E3%2580%258B%25E2%2580%259C%25E4%25BB%258E%25E5%25B8%2588%25E6%2581%25B0%25E5%25BE%2597%25E7%259C%259F%25E5%25A6%2582%25E8%25B6%25A3%25EF%25BC%258C%25E4%25B8%2580%25E6%2589%258B%25E5%25BD%2592%25E6%259D%25A5%25E4%25B8%25A4%25E6%2589%258B%25E7%25A9%25BA%25E2%2580%259D%25E3%2580%2581%25E5%258F%25AA%25E5%25B0%2586%25E2%2580%259C%25E4%25B8%2580%25E6%2589%258B%25E2%2580%259D%25E6%2594%25B9%25E4%25B8%25BA%25E2%2580%259C%25E4%25B8%258D%25E6%2582%2594%25E2%2580%259D%25EF%25BC%258C%25E7%25AC%2594%25E8%2580%2585%25E8%25AE%25A4%25E4%25B8%25BA%25E8%25AF%25A5%25E4%25BC%259A%25E9%2595%25BF%25E5%258E%259F%25E4%25BD%259C%25E6%25B6%2589%25E5%25AB%258C%25E9%259B%25B7%25E5%2590%258C%25E3%2580%2581%25E4%25BB%25BF%25E4%25BD%259C%25E5%258F%25A4%25E4%25BA%25BA%25E4%25BB%2596%25E4%25BA%25BA%25E5%258F%25A5%25E6%2584%258F%25E5%258F%25A5%25E5%25BC%258F%25EF%25BC%258C%25E5%258E%259F%25E5%2588%259B%25E6%2580%25A7%25E4%25B8%258D%25E8%25B6%25B3%25EF%25BC%2581%25E5%2586%258D%25E8%2580%2585%25E2%2580%259C%25E7%258C%25AE%25E8%25BA%25AB%25E7%2590%2586%25E6%2583%25B3%25E2%2580%259D%25E5%25AE%258C%25E5%2585%25A8%25E6%2598%25AF%25E7%258E%25B0%25E4%25BB%25A3%25E5%258F%25A3%25E8%25AF%25AD%25E5%258C%2596%25E3%2580%2581%25E2%2580%259C%25E5%25AE%2588%25E5%25BB%2589%25E8%2580%2590%25E5%25BE%2597%25E6%25B8%2585%25E5%25AE%2598%25E8%258B%25A6%25E2%2580%259D%25E4%25B8%25AD%25E2%2580%259C%25E5%25AE%2588%25E5%25BB%2589%25E2%2580%259D%25E4%25B8%258E%25E2%2580%259C%25E6%25B8%2585%25E5%25AE%2598%25E8%258B%25A6%25E2%2580%259D%25E5%259C%25A8%25E4%25B8%2580%25E5%258F%25A5%25E4%25B8%25AD%25E4%25B9%259F%25E6%25B6%2589%25E5%25AB%258C%25E8%25AF%25AD%25E4%25B9%2589%25E9%2587%258D%25E5%25A4%258D%25E6%25AF%25AB%25E6%2597%25A0%25E8%2589%25BA%25E6%259C%25AF%25E6%2580%25A7%25E7%25BC%25BA%25E4%25B9%258F%25E8%25AF%2597%25E6%2584%258F%25E3%2580%2582%25E5%2590%2584%25E4%25BD%258D%25E7%259C%258B%25E5%25AE%2598%25E8%25AE%25A4%25E4%25B8%25BA%25E5%2591%25A2%25EF%25BC%259F%2523%26t%3D761%26extparam%3Dcot%253D1%2526dfp%253D200 ……

……##砦烁钲《七绝·清廉颂·依韵和吟石庆元会长〈清廉颂〉》中附注石庆元会长原作《清廉颂》“天下为公装在胸，献身理想是初衷。守廉耐得清官苦，不悔归来两手空”中“天下为公”是否属于合理化用？#

……##砦烁钲《七绝·清廉颂·依韵和吟石庆元会长〈清廉颂〉》中附注石庆元会长原作《清廉颂》“天下为公装在胸，献身理想是初衷。守廉耐得清官苦，不悔归来两手空”诗中的“不悔归来两手空”是否构成对明·姜希孟诗“一手归来两手空”的抄袭？#

……##石庆元《清廉颂》诗中“天下为公装在胸”的“天下为公”是否属于合理化用、而与“装在胸”组合是不是又含语义重复之嫌？#

……##现代口语比如石庆元《清廉颂》中“献身理想是初衷”的“献身理想”入诗是否会影响古典诗的格调？现代人写古诗用“献身理想”算不算合理，有没有成功案例？#

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